Honestly, I haven't really read a 'text/IM/Call' story yet that I could really get into, but you pulled this off really well. You really developed your characters, and everything seemed REAL, and that's really important. You did a great job! The only thing I'm upset about is that Vic ended up with Erik. I liked Marcus sooooooo much more! (*wails*)

I always hated IM stories...
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Okay. That was a lie. I hate every single freakin' IM/Chat story except this one...bcuz...
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It's plain awesome. Very well written, easy to follow, and it actually has a story line! I loved it! :)

hmm.. i really wanted her to end up with marcus :( but i guess the best friends always ends up together.. i get it though.. why go trough making another person know you in and out, when there already is a person out there with the information .. btw, loved the story :)

Shit! :D hahaha! that was just so light-hearted n fun to read you know? at the same time - i have this best friend who was my first crush n the one whom i always keep rebounding on n shit like that! :P just cant let him go u know? he's too damn special! :D - so i could really connect with ur story! :D

Loved it! :)

Just finished reading this in one sitting xD. I'm glad I was able to catch it after you finished the story or else I would have been left pondering what would happen next D: Overall I was impressed with how you made this format fit with your story line; initially I thought it wouldn't have worked out but the way you wrote it made it flow nicely! I especially loved the interactions with Mel and the other characters :D very amusing and LOL-funny! She is one hilarious girl xD. Maybe you can write a spin-off starring her as the main character [wink-cough-cough]. In the end, I sort of disagree with the pairing of how Vic and Erik just ended up together that way and Marcus giving up so easily :-\, then again he is such a nice and understanding person (which was why I was rooting for him xD). Well done and much kudos for an entertaining read!

i much prefer that marcus wasnt mushy.

lovely. :)

a) i totally approve of this format.

b) i also find it interesting

c) so i dont mean d) hurtfully but

d) the timing on the phone calls seem slightly off. like, that probably wouldnt take 23 minutes, you know?

e) really though, i intend to keep reading.

I just really loved this story. Great Job!

I still feel bad for Marcus .

*Laughs* XD I really ought not say that, it isn't nice, but I still feel bad for him.

But, yay! I think that it's nice you did some skillful editing of the "talking". I couldn't stand the idea of reading twenty pages of dialog.

Poor Marcus D: I'm rooting for Erik and Vic and all, but he's such a sweetheart.

I love the "Call Time" at the end XD I don't know, I just think that it's funny because that's always what I look at after I hang up the phone...

Eek! Cute :3

Teehee! Cute :3 I liked seeing things from Alex's point of view. It made things a lot... nicer, in a way, because she's not just a filler character anymore.

While that was adorable with Josh and Mel, I have personal feelings against confessing to someone via text or over the phone .

*Laughs* Which I guess is a little impossible to avoid in this format...

"Let's have some fun"

XD PRICELESS.