Reviews for To the Core
Colton M. H chapter 12 . 9/1/2008
Good job again! Although, I hope I don't forget this is a flashback in the next chapter; I've done things like that and asked something that made me seem stupid, so hopefully I don't forget. All in all, I like the backstory. I myself reveal backstories of people slowly and without backstories, but hey, I'm not the one in charge of your writing.
Colton M. H chapter 11 . 9/1/2008
Good again!
Colton M. H chapter 10 . 8/31/2008
This is getting better and better; an obviously advanced alien species and you somehow are managing to keep them within the realm of possibility unlike a lot of authors do. Can't wait for more!
Colton M. H chapter 9 . 8/30/2008
Interesting still. I liked how it doesn't feature everything but has a more "And so " at the end so that it doesn't drag on forever. Good job.
Colton M. H chapter 8 . 8/29/2008
This is really good! Your pretty creative, I see it being sorta like Star Trek in a sense but different; they travel unknown space but don't just leave in a day and seems really original. Good job!
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