|Reviews for Anthology: Vignettes|
| captured.by.wonderland chapter 9 . 1/8/2009
| captured.by.wonderland chapter 6 . 1/8/2009
Awh... what can I say, but Awh...
| captured.by.wonderland chapter 5 . 1/8/2009
hahaha, I love it!
Your writing... wow.
Great sense of humor.
| Solitary Fatalist chapter 9 . 12/1/2008
Loved every single bit.. From story one to nine.. Each one was thought-provoking, unique, yet flowing as from a fountain..
Only, I apologize for not reviewing every chapter.. They'd all be too short if I did.. XD
| Solitary Fatalist chapter 5 . 12/1/2008
What do you want?-
This is funny.. XD
I'm loving your works more and more.. Keep at it!
| Sophronia Lee chapter 6 . 11/28/2008
Death Becomes You:
This piece is quite good. I love all of the description; I got a vivid mental picture of the dead chick. The fifth line is sheer poetry. :)
Between Two Mirrors:
The beginning sentence really hooked me (it was a hooker _). The rest of it, though, was only alright. The plot was interesting enough, but the writing style was a bit dry. My mind kind of wandered while I read.
This made me sad. I realize it was probably supposed to, though, so good job! I like you writing style here. It's a little archaic, but that totally works for this piece.
Heavy Metal Angel:
I thought this was funny. Ironic, even. Again, good job on style and description. It played out like a movie in my mind.
| Sophronia Lee chapter 5 . 11/28/2008
Very cute. I like the writing style here. It's modern and straight-foward and easy to read.
I also like how you wrote it inside the nararator's thoughts. Everything seems very real and enthralling.
I enjoyed how you ended this piece with a little chunk of irony; like she could have anything she wanted but didn't have time to think it through and only got a chocolate bar, that stinks!
Congratulations on not totally destroying the story with excessive spelling/grammar errors. There were a few, but not enough to be distracting.
| Imalefty chapter 2 . 11/11/2008
hey kylie! a review from the review game in celebration of its first birthday! :)
Wow. That’s really all I can say. It’s super short… probably only a few hundred words. (not even?) But seriously, that was amazing – you capture the man’s attitude AND the scene around him perfectly… there wasn’t a word wasted. :) I also love how it ended… you didn’t reveal anything more than you had to…
Okay anyway. Sorry this review is so short and doesn’t really provide any concrit at all. Mostly because… I don’t have any. XD Great job!
| Equilibrium chapter 8 . 10/14/2008
Wow, your short stories are brilliant! I read through them all like a bullet, and I especially like "Fading" and "Heavy Metal Angel" - the former was beautifully creepy, and the latter made me choke on my coffee. Please update soon! I'd love to read more of these.
| HannaThing chapter 7 . 9/28/2008
I like how short and sweet it is. Makes it easy to read, and leaves me wanting more.
However, I don't like how it seems to be written from the point of view as someone not human. Doesn't feel authentic.