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Reviews for
Here My Body Lies
Bella-Rose McBroth
chapter 1 .
8/20/2009
This is scary.
Kiwi-kiwi6
chapter 1 .
8/28/2008
The rhyming is good, but the rhythm is off a little. I bet if you tweaked it a little bit you could get it to flow better.
I liked the poem, though. It has a good meaning!
~kiwi