Reviews for Here My Body Lies
Bella-Rose McBroth chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
This is scary.
Kiwi-kiwi6 chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
The rhyming is good, but the rhythm is off a little. I bet if you tweaked it a little bit you could get it to flow better.

I liked the poem, though. It has a good meaning!