Your depiction of loneliness is utterly creepy! But your descriptions are so detailed. I am confused as to why you made loneliness appear so tempting, but like how you contrast its appearance with reality.

You make solitude seem so poetic... but in a negative fashion. I already know how much it sucks to be lonely, but it's like you magnify the feeling times one-hundred, in a crazy, talented way.

Anyway, I really like this..

Katie

This one is really visually and emotionally striking. I really like how you've utilized the bold words in the last line of the first stanza. And the physical descriptions help to visualize the whole writing in a literal way. I can very much relate to this piece. Very good sir!