Reviews for Deafening Silence
Tearlit chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Reviewing for MB Contest.

I like how you used first person POV - most people don't use that for the contest. It was a nice change. This was quite angsty, but fairly well done, though you might want to watch that it doesn't become too much. You wove the prompt in effectively and I connected quite a bit with the character. It would've been nice to get some clue as to what she did to cause the man to leave.

Very nice!

emeraldwater chapter 1 . 8/29/2008

I just read your story! It's so gorgeous and beautiful. I really can hear and feel the silence while reading it.


deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Well... Id say it was great personally. I felt once again like you were almost talking to my situation, which as a writer is important to do. And because I love it so much and relate so well, I think it deserves a fav :)