I am so glad you didn't take the punching scene out! Gawd I love that part Juliet should be glad that she got the privileged to be punched by a royal fist!

i absolutly love this story so far! lol it's adorable but with just the right amount of punch in it so it dosen't get boring for a second! i love your writing style and i hope you'll update soon! :D

Aww Derek's so brilliant! I hope Alex gets delayed even more! Would give her and Derek more bonding time :) Are they ever going to talk about the kiss? Can't wait for the next chapter.

Azure x

...Hahaha. wow.

Derek! Claim you're woman!

Uwahh, you should update :)

I love the extra scene about the King and queen, it makes it all the more genuine I think... Anyway can't wait for the next chapter I really hope you did not take out the punching scene!

HAPPY WRITINGS!

Interesting and intriguing. :)

hehe sounds awesome :D

xx

Ali

This was a LONG oneshot :\

But i liked it(: P

Perfect, best one shot I've read in a while.

XD

they fall in love pretty quickly.. haha.. but i guess that's the beauty of it.. :)

Haha, this was very sweet and entertaining! :D

Thanks for sharing it with us! :DD

egoiahgioehwga! that was so cute! i cannot contain my feelings about that, lol. sorry about that outburst, it was just so adorable. i love how she didn't end up with charming, he was such a jerk to her. derek is perfect. i loved it. :)

Love it! WHat a unique story...

And yet again you managed to write a story that is capable of making me melt ;) It was a fun and light read, and I loved Alexandra. She actually reminds me somewhat of myself...although I don't quite have a Derek in my life!

Your story is definitely becoming another favorite of mine. Perhaps in the near future you will write about these two again? I would absolutely love to read that story. I'm positive that I'll fall in love with that one, too!