I liked this chapter. I thought it gave us a lot of insight into Scry's mind, helping us to understand his character better. It also gave us a brief look at the inner workings of your world.

I look forward to reading more of this!

Your description was good and your sentences flowed really well. On the whole, not much to say here. This is really interesting so far )

This was an interesting start. It also did what a good prologue should do, which is raise questions while setting up the rest of the story. Overall, not a bad start.

hmm I think I might have been in a tinsy weensy bit of a bad mood when I wrote my last review.

Anyways...I really really like this switching between this and The power Quintet really is proof of how much your writing has improved...Scrye is fun and amuses me :D

The switching between time and point of view is really making this an interesting read!

Much love to this story... and have no doubt I shall to continue reading.

...I made an effort in this review...love me!

I find the world you have created to be very convincing. Scry is a very interesting fellow as well. Most people would be gung-ho for a chance to be lauded as special, but he wants nothing of it! Perhaps that is the best kind of hero.

I hope you update soon! I want to know what happens next!

Yup. Pretty sweet!

I thought it was really interesting, and I was engaged until the very end. You're descriptions of the battlfield were great. Nasty, but great. I like the concept, of men being manipulated quite literally by their patron god or goddess.

As this is sort of a history lesson almost, (I get the impression that it is an entry in history text) I won't gripe about the sparseness, as I think it ended much to quickly.

Great start! This is very promising.

Wow, I like this.

I don't know what else to say other than, I really do like this.

Nice imagination. Nice little character relationships and nice Pure white light.

I read this and love th idea...but as it is you jason writing this... I feel you can do better than this.

Beautiful :) Might I recommend a tinsey bit more description? ;)