Reviews for You Inspire Me
crzyxswirls chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
How deep. This is an interesting, realistic story. Outside the fluff and love of every romance story there is always the hard saddening truth. T_T Great, great story/one-shot!
Icyfire4w5 chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Amazing... I am satisfied with the current length of this story. To me, the ending is like a Big Bang.
friend 49 chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
Okay, so I'm feeling really lazy. I was going to do just a little short no-quote review, because I'm feeling pretty down, but I just /had/ to comment on this line...

"It is as if they have a life of their own, a life you cannot learn to control."

This is beautiful.

"Your smile is my happy pill, my sun – this you will never know."

This too.

All of the last lines of each paragraph seem to be following a particular trend... They're all awesome, to put it simply.

Excellent job!

This is really relatable.

Really relatable.
Fayre Meira chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
fucking sad man. but a path many girls have been before. alas.
eshlie chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
Lovely.
i-aspire chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
:'( that's so sad... :(

Y DOES HE HAVE A GIRLFRIEND? lol.

u shud have told me ur idea about my story b4! damn u! lol

i might use it...

:( UR STORY IS STILL SAD THO :(

xx

Tess