|Reviews for Crosswords|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2020
amazing amazing AMAZING
| rosieroo chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
Hey! I absolutely adored your story and I got the chance to review it! So it's now a part of ADoR, under our one-shot category :D Here's your review:
Rosie Thinks: I'm not going to lie to you - if a guy came up behind me in a cafe and told me the answer to the crossword I was working on, I would run screaming for the woods. Luckily, this didn't happen to me and this one-shot isn't about how the MC got so freaked out she never left the house again (ergo, she's not me). Instead, Mad for Figs takes a completely unique and freaky situation, and turns it into something magical (as per usual). Seriously, within the first segment, I went from 'omg he's scary' to 'awww ok that's kind of cute', and my feelings just progressed into cuteness from there.
I really did enjoy the uniqueness of this story. It's not long, but makes for a nice interlude between heavier reads. The only mistake I saw was 'weary' instead of 'wary' (I'm sorry, it's one of my pet hates!) but other than that, there were no errors to break up the flow. So all in all, 'Crosswords' tells the tale of what happens when you look outside your small, comfortable circle and take notice of what's right in front of your nose.
| Jess chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
I dont understand...if her name is emily,y does dylan call her garth?
| deets1 chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Haha. Another first of 2014. I really like this nke too. It's a very original oneshot. It's an idea few would think of, but that you rolled with very well
| APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Love this story :D
| my princess ending chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
My safari restarted and I logged out and I lost my review. Oh no!
Although you said I wouldn't like it, I ended up liking it. I always like your stories even if they don't end up the way I want them to. :)
I had so much written, I can't remember what I wrote. Haha, I'm so sorry!
my princess ending
| Brielle Gemson chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
i want this to be my life, please.
| Gyp chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
What i really don't understand is, if he liked her so much, why didn't he made the first move instead of "looking at her from afar, waiting patiently for her to notice him?"
Nevertheless, i enjoyed this one shot! Keep writing :D
| Minkaos chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
I really enjoyed this oneshot! It was very adorable and I love the characters :)
| Dreaminglight chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Wow i can't believe how oblivious she's been to his existance. Hope you can make a sequel to this story. I really liked it. Usually its the popular one who is oblivious to one's existence but this story is the other eay around. Lol
| dreeming chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
| Ceri Anne chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
I've just found your stories, in case you couldn't tell! Again, such a sweet story. I loved hoe Jason had been watching her for ages, and finally got up the courage to talk to her, Can't wait to read more of your work.
| MeAsIAm chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
This is kind of eerie, because something like this is happening in my life. I really empathize with Emily because I've been hearing the same from my friends (that I am blind etc) and I have been wondering about the same. The ending won't apply to this story of mine - at least I think so :)
I'd read this oneshot before - it's amazing :) Excellent work, especially the characterization.
| Montara chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
I like it. :)
| witeaya chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
i want a jason too..