awww hugging from behind that so cuteeee. .jee lovesick. .Aiden is so cuteeeeeee

This story left me wanting for more. Great job btw :)

ugh...i dared to click, and discovered yet another teenage-misfit-girl-with-attitude addressing addressing me bluntly in first person. these things just never seem to end...

speaking of unendingness, have you ever read "A Simple Song for Lori" by bitter kiss, and continued by the milk bottle? same concept. better execution...in my humble opinion, that is. there seems to be a whole lot of narration and dialogue, not enough plot and actual development. what got me here though was the way you wrote first person. i understand that...taegan...needs to be unique and full of in-your-face attitude (if not at school, then at least in her mind, of course!) but her personality can be shown in ways other than sarcasm and blunt sentences.

nah...actually, your sentences are okay; i was exaggerating a bit, and actually tonight i'm out for blood (too much bio studying can make a girl vicious). well...i'm gonna post this anyway, and if you ever read this, at least you'll have a vicious review to look at if you want to feel depressed. or you can just delete it. lol...

Hey.

I review to critique people and help them improve. So far though, my brain has gone into hibernation so I'm sorry to say I won't be able to say much in the way of improvement.

But I have to say, your cliffhangers are a good thing to use here. You know how to use them effectively and that's something a lot of writers should know how to do. Congratulations!

I am also entertained by your work. Thoroughly. Until of course, I stumble into some unrealistic bits such as Dirk suddenly going into the room when it was supposed to be locked and the hallway was big enough for him to run around in.

And some other word usage mistakes.

I'd like to help out more because I think you're doing a good job but I think I'm having multiple brain farts which is why the writing Nazi refuses to come out of his hiding place.

wtf this is over? what happens to them do they go out? wtf tht was a horrible ending!

ALL i have to say is HOLY-SHIT!

really good so far! :)

I like this story. I'm inly on the third chapter, but I hope it won't end with 7 chapters. Please, please, please, please *repeatedly says 'please'* add more chapters to the story!

Sweet! But I loved the name Taegan. *pout* Anyway, thanks for the warning!

So I came here thinking this story'd be quite bad, but boy was I wrong! I love Taegan's attitude and abruptly hilarious thoughts. She's great! Very well written and I'm eager to read the next chapter! c:

You did an absolutely great job! I love your story, haha. It had me laughing out loud on more than one occasion!

aw no its fin aw i have to go cry

i lurve it

Well all in all, this was just plain cute. It was quirky, well written, and with neat characters. A truly fun read. Great work!

I was seriously wondering why Dirk had been included in so many events for the story so far, so to finally have a reason for his existace was really nice! I'm glad that you cleared that up! And Adien's being really sweet.

Another good chapter! Now I'll continue reading!