FINISH IT! FINISH THE STORY PLEASE!

HEY! Knock, Knock, Knock! Anyone up there still. Were are the five more chapters you said you had left? HELLO! It's been two or so years!

Hola,

I hope you post a new chapter soon

This is such a strange culture. And Connor is not the charming gentleman I thought he was at first. And I'm confused about his lover too.

Nice story! I noticed one mistake though in this chapter. "They don't have room for the poverty" could better be written as "They don't have room for the poor."

please finish this story pretty pretty pretty please

Amazing story! I really hope that you will finish it! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl

Yes, Ella, you lost your resolve and you fell in love. Right in front of some ten year old kid ... Lol

Ok I hope you update really soon. It's an awesome story.

I started crying after i read this. please keep writing.

Yo might want to pop the question to Ella first

I fell in love with this story from the start and I like where it has headed. I do sense that Vincent knows more than he is letting on and that his father has a lot to do with the murder of Ella's grandfather. I hope that Ella and Connor will find a way to be together in the end and that she will be able to trust him and everyone else that is on her side. PLEASE write more soon...

Love, AmericanBeauty456

An update! :O

AND NOW we know the truth!

MORE! Ah. So much drama. Need answers. Lol. Great job so far! I really enjoyed it.

Wow.

I almost cried in that chapter. I mean my own nose was hurting. It was very descriptive; I loved the imagery. I anticipate what will happen next now that Ella has a good majority of the truth!