|Reviews for What holds the Earth Together|
| Sweet.Surrendering chapter 2 . 9/2/2008
Once again, your imagery is beautiful. Part II definitely helps move the story along, or at least set something up. I'm curious as to what the history between Mickey, D and Steven is and I know I'll find out but I'm highly intrigued...
Good job. :)
| Sweet.Surrendering chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
You use some beautiful imagery and I'm a big fan of imagery. Unfortunately, I had a hard time following what was actually going on in this piece. It was as though the story was buried by too much imagery. I think it could be simplified to the point where the story actually comes through while painting a picture in the reader's head. I do admire your way with words, though.