|Reviews for Their Stories|
| owlvisions chapter 5 . 6/14/2009
cool. are you going to continue this in a story?
| owlvisions chapter 4 . 5/7/2009
very interesting...I really like the characters.
| Alan Ball chapter 3 . 10/9/2008
The sister is the one that intrigues me the most; there is a lot of scope for their story. I hope it will be worth reading! *pushes expectation on the author* :p
| Sarthim chapter 3 . 10/7/2008
I am really wanting to know where this story is headed. My suggestion would be to either have a page displaying all of the major characters, or revealing them as the story goes on.
Either way, I am anxious to see the next installment.
(Good characters by the way. If you give them dynamics and multiple sides to their personalities, the story will become that much more better).
| Sarthim chapter 2 . 9/9/2008
Hmm...well this has me interested. The characters seem interesting to be sure. I would reccomend though that you start to work on the story soon as this is only background info...maybe introduce other major characters in the plotline of the story?
Well, never mind my rambling, do as you wish. I can't tell where the story is going to go from here but you certainly have me intrigued.