Reviews for I can't move
lipleaf chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
I liked the simplicity of this poem. The tone of the speaker is very blunt and doesn't mince their words. They express their feelings in very few words. However, I think it could use a little more elaboration. As it is, it's a bit too bland. Simplicity is usually good, but you have to have enough to interest the reader.