Reviews for In the Heart of a Four Year Old
Spurlunk chapter 2 . 8/31/2008
Nice, intriguing idea! And VERY well written. I like your writing style - paragraphs not too long, with a good bit of dialogue mixed in. However, Matt sounds pretty sophisticated for a 12 year old I think. And he's too mean to Sarah. xD
StarGazer88 chapter 2 . 8/31/2008
This is really cool! I love your idea, and your characters. The description is very effective, although you've mannaged to leave enough mystery around Kishi and who Sarah really is to grip the reader. Just one small thing; when a cat is really mad, their eyes dilate, not contract. So Mr Jinkerz iris' would be almost swallowed by the black pupil. :)