Reviews for Maid service
Simplydonthaveanaccount chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Incredible. Rather dark, which isn't quite my cup of tea usually, and yet... Somehow I love it. Your writing is the level I hope to achieve someday

-Lily
rhymemaker chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
I love the last two lines.

unrelated, but why is it "stalking" to read most or all of someones poems. Stalking is bad, appreciating someone's work enough to want to see more is good. -K
kit feral chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
... Wow.

I would love to hear you read this.

It's... mildly breathtaking.

Very nice.
i-want-2-delete-my-account chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
It's sad, but I really like it.

Really like lines 5, 6 and 10.
Doxology chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
Horribly sad. I think you portrayed the feeling well. Good job.

Cheers,

Doxology