|Reviews for Sweet Alchemy|
| Undead Serenade chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
'A clumsy, straggly plant with too-heavy leaves,'
it's almost too human. How cute. I like the descriptions, they're nice and story like. Not abstract but storyteller esque.
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Ich liebe Rhabarber und wenn er dann noch von einer Meister-Köchin zubereitet wird! Mir läuft das Wasser im Munde zusammen!
| DefineBeauty chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
wow, i love the description in this! it paints the perfect picture and you can clearly imagine what its going on.
i also like the format. it seems to work well with this piece and enhance the uniqueness of it
speaking of unique, this piece is different, i've never seen a piece describing the making of food before, so props to you ]
i love the last line, edible jewels ]
| StarGazer88 chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
Beautiful. Simple. I love it!