|Reviews for Smirnoff
| Sit In Solemn Silence chapter 4 . 9/18/2008
So short! *sob* But cute, in all its shortness. It was so, so, well I can only think of the word in spanish, but whatever, it was good! I must go whore your story now, because everyone needs to read it! Ciao!
| Sit In Solemn Silence chapter 3 . 9/15/2008
Hello! I liked the glimpse into Leslie's past. But why doesn't Devin remember his dads name? And why does no one else? That part confused me :( Smirnoffs are weird little buggers aren't they? Beautiful job, see you next chapter!
| Bohemian Daughter chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading (and I'm sorry I only have enough time to read the first chapter at the moment!)
Anyway! This is really interesting, from what I can see you have a good grasp on your Leslie character.
The only thing I can think of suggesting is that you have a lot of dialog, maybe you could add some more content in there between all the chatter?
Great start, anyway! :D
| Bluorange chapter 2 . 9/4/2008
Yay a smirnoff! I have a feeling I'm going to like these little guys.(That's a good thing right?) Hmm, I wonder how Leslie is going to mess up this cliched little fantasy land. I can't wait to see! Much Loves
| Sit In Solemn Silence chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
This was an amazing start! It left so many good ways the plot can be developed. The whisked away to a magical land seems kind of cliched and monotone, but if this is how you write I have a feeling that it will be one hell of a story! There were a few typos, but definitely nothing urgent or extreme. Bring on the smirnoff!