Reviews for Lullaby
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Reading this was like reading a gentle lullaby, it was very sweet and flowed pretty well. Very cute :)
Isca chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
I liked the third stanza the best. It was so genuine and pure :)

The first sentence of the last stanza should read: "So now all I can say is this." It rhymed really well, and had a great rhythm to it :)
gg. lass chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
this

is

gorgeous!

yours until the wind changes,

gg
just.because.lemonade.stand chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
heydarling. i love it. i really really love it. thank you so much for writing. i was kind of kidding when i suggested it, but when you agreed i got really exctied. sing to me?