|Reviews for Deserve It?-|
| circumspice chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
A good idea but could be executed better. The rhythm is inconsistent and the rhyming seems forced, especially "when you smile you looked elfish"
| Gweyalynne chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
listen folks never gamble...hehehe jk the poem rox my sox keep em comin!*
| A. Ushio chapter 1 . 4/19/2001
Not as good as others by the same author. Absence of meter seems to hurt the end rhyme.