Reviews for Anthology: Poetry |
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![]() ![]() ![]() haha this was SO cute! I really liked it. It once again had a good flow to it. at first i was like, 'uhoh this isn't going to be some lame biology lesson, because i hate science' but it indeed was adorable. loved that last line:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm very intruiging song. loved the concept of he bravely ran away from the dragon and he cowarldy did slay that was nifty. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehe oversized butter knife. very nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow you have such a great tone in this peice and the flow is spectacualar. and the end was very dun-dun-dun if you get what i'm saying. very nice job:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Those with substance, very few." "This futile search for vain perfection?" LOVED those lines i really liked this one too :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice little subliminal messages with the almost-unknown nicknames... (at least I didn't know them haha;;) and yet it fits so perfectly together... plus you managed to add in that texan accent hehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() you use repetition REALLY well without it getting old or boring. i like how u captured the cycle and how you twisted the words around a little bit each time so that they meant something completely new. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW this is amazing O.O the repetition, the rhythm make it SOUND pretty.. but then the overall imagery.. so mysterious and melancholy.. i really like this :] |