haha this was SO cute! I really liked it. It once again had a good flow to it. at first i was like, 'uhoh this isn't going to be some lame biology lesson, because i hate science' but it indeed was adorable. loved that last line:)

hmm very intruiging song. loved the concept of he bravely ran away from the dragon and he cowarldy did slay that was nifty.

hehe oversized butter knife. very nice.

wow you have such a great tone in this peice and the flow is spectacualar. and the end was very dun-dun-dun if you get what i'm saying. very nice job:)

"Those with substance, very few." "This futile search for vain perfection?" LOVED those lines

i really liked this one too :]

nice little subliminal messages with the almost-unknown nicknames... (at least I didn't know them haha;;) and yet it fits so perfectly together... plus you managed to add in that texan accent hehe

you use repetition REALLY well without it getting old or boring.

i like how u captured the cycle and how you twisted the words around a little bit each time so that they meant something completely new.

WOW this is amazing O.O

the repetition, the rhythm make it SOUND pretty..

but then the overall imagery.. so mysterious and melancholy.. i really like this :]