|Reviews for Anthology: Poetry|
| fatbird33 chapter 11 . 12/1/2008
haha this was SO cute! I really liked it. It once again had a good flow to it. at first i was like, 'uhoh this isn't going to be some lame biology lesson, because i hate science' but it indeed was adorable. loved that last line:)
| fatbird33 chapter 8 . 12/1/2008
hmm very intruiging song. loved the concept of he bravely ran away from the dragon and he cowarldy did slay that was nifty.
| fatbird33 chapter 7 . 12/1/2008
hehe oversized butter knife. very nice.
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
wow you have such a great tone in this peice and the flow is spectacualar. and the end was very dun-dun-dun if you get what i'm saying. very nice job:)
| likes to headbang chapter 9 . 9/6/2008
"Those with substance, very few." "This futile search for vain perfection?" LOVED those lines
i really liked this one too :]
| likes to headbang chapter 13 . 9/6/2008
nice little subliminal messages with the almost-unknown nicknames... (at least I didn't know them haha;;) and yet it fits so perfectly together... plus you managed to add in that texan accent hehe
| likes to headbang chapter 2 . 9/6/2008
you use repetition REALLY well without it getting old or boring.
i like how u captured the cycle and how you twisted the words around a little bit each time so that they meant something completely new.
| likes to headbang chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
WOW this is amazing O.O
the repetition, the rhythm make it SOUND pretty..
but then the overall imagery.. so mysterious and melancholy.. i really like this :]