Reviews for Horrible Mistake
Penny the Writer chapter 1 . 6/27/2016
I think this was the most beautiful story I have ever read, why did you you stop writing.
Faith chapter 1 . 6/27/2016
Beautiful...
notepaddy chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
That's cool...) I like it!
katmelnyk chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Beautiful...
absentmindedprof chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Beautiful. Passionate and melancholy and heart-wrenchingly beautiful. :)
FreekyDisaster18 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
This is amazing! Beautifully short with flawless writing that keeps the reader hooked with every word. Fantastic.
fellintothemoon chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Hey there, babe! Horrible Mistake has been added to the ADoR archive under the One Shot section. Here's your review:

Melissa Thinks: The definition of short and bitter-sweet, Horrible Mistake by Penelope P. definitely lives up to the reputation this well written author has made for herself. It's a simple, yet complex, one shot that explores the true nature of good and evil. It's compact; packing a powerful punch to those who read it. Not only does the premise stray from the cliched angel/demon stories, but it leaves much to the reader's imagination: what happened before this beautiful scene took place? What are the specifics of this complex relationship our two main characters share? What strange world do these creatures live in? And most importantly, what happens next?
ClosetReader chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
I've rereading this so many times and each time it moves me to tears.
burn321 chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Okay this was sad, and amazing at the same time, I wish There was more of this story I could read! I really like this one! It's cute but not cute. Okay well more to read, ttyl
Black Wolf Fang chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
this is a touching story. I really like it. :)
ILveJcb chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Wow! Oh, man! That is amazing! Why the hell is it a one shot? This story deserves to be told! I want to know more! Aw! I love it! Is there any chance that you'll write more? Please say yes...
Fugly chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Short, but beautiful.
Rachel Hardington chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
aww :( thats so sad! I loved it.
Natasha Dust chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Ouch! That was beautifully sad and heartbreaking... an Angel who loved the Devil even at the last moment as he killed her and enjoyed it with all his being... *cries*

Too bad he was late to realize just how much he actually loved her... :(
I Murder on Impulse chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
I love this story so much. It never fails to make my heart ache.

xx

Ali
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