Reviews for Horrible Mistake
TasteYourSins chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
I'm crying. Can you believe that? Well I can because I AM crying. :( LOVED IT. Horrible mistake Mr. Devil. :(
Cee.wat.i.live.for chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Aww, I really like this. It was very well written. It was pretty sad at the end, But thats what happens when you don't think through everything before you do it lol. Beautiful, really :)
j.c-chic chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
i cried :(
YourCritic chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
Love it. Very well done indeed.
Elle Winters 9 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Beautiful is the only thing i can think of whilst reflecting on that story.
aureliasilver chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
I really love this story. It's so well written even though it's short.
SandmanCircus chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
That was beautiful.
Aletheia Svannon chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
Amazing but aww..it's truly sad :(

I could feel the angsty side from the story when the angel died after gave her goodbye kiss to the devil..

Keep writing!
TheUltimateAesSedai chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Wow this is absolutely sad. Awesome job. I love it.
Aaerie chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
aw no dont die
Alexandra Paige chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
beautiful. I'm not one for oneshots but this was really great. Simple but perfect :)
MarieAnn chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Wow this is beautifully written.
the lovely rebel chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
Beautiful.
bubublacz chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
I really like the idea of using Death as the character.
gogaga chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
oh my gosh. that was so wicked. I'm just wondering whether or not you would create a kind of short story for this. truly addicted. This is something I would bookmark and read over and over again. kudos.
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