Hm...this was very good. I can't say I particularly like the ending, as I am a sucker for happy endings, but it was extremely well written. Excellent one-shot!

that was totally sad!

Very nice and sad.

Just my type of story.

Ciao

Marvelous.

that is really intense.

aw. first time i've read this. It made me cry...

i love it, its so pure and sad(even tho it did have the devil) i cried. i loved it :)

I love the concept of this story.

It's so touching and emotional.

You're a truly amazing author.

So jealous. :P

Brilliant.

Simply brilliant.

The story is so very sad and slightly depressing. You are a very good author, and I love both of your magnificent stories.

I envy you.

Ooh. That's so sad. God I love your stuff! bhahah

xx

bella.

Okay.

That was so freaking sad.

You know, this is an amazing one-shot.

But it could be material for another awesome story by you :D

wow i love it where did you get the idea for it you r an awesome writer

oh, so sad! it was so beautiful. I almost cryed... that was awesome!

That was awesome. There mustve been some moral I did not catch.

Lol, but liked reading it, added a nice touch of tragedy.

wow

that

wow

really

Really

prety!

i like

lots!

is pretty