In my honest opinion this was a really crappy story, I am not trying to be rude or anything but there was not even much romance you could have at least done more romance instead of her bloody changing her mind about her love for him near the end, I was very disappointed with this story. Again I am not trying to be rude it is just my honest opinion

Cool story.

Awesome story!

How sweet!

Great chapter! Don't worry about spell check. It doesn't always work for me either. Your spelling (exept for a few typos) is fine.

I've been reading this story and I like the plot, but I have to stop now. No offence, but your spelling is terrible. I cannot read this anymore because there are too many errors, and it irritates me. I suggest a beta.

K, so I apreciate you guys reading my story and taking time to review, but...i didn't copy Twilight. Honestly I put baseball in cuz they needed to go somewhere so they could crash on the way back. I had a baseball game on at the time and said. "Hey that'll work." And the thunderstorm was just to add drama to the scene on the road and to keep Jaden and Thayne on the road rather than letting them leave. I mean it wasn't like they were playing baseball in a thunderstorm to mask the sound or something. Thunderstorms and baseball just kinda happened in the same chapter. Jeeze.

I don't want to come off as angry or defensive, and I really am thankfull you guys took the time to review. But I guess I kinda just took offence to the acusations that I was copying Twilight. I spent a long time on this story, especially the scene ont he road after the baseball game, so it was kind of insulting to be told I was copying. Thats not fair at all. I didn't even think of Twilight until I named the chapter and then it was just a passing, "Ha, that's kind of a funny coincidence." The things I write are mine, and I work really hard not to be influenced by other people's work.

So yeah...anyway. Thanks for reading.

Oh very nice twist! I love it.

A AGREE WITH EMILY THIS IS SO COPYING TWILIGHT SO LAME BUT I LIKE THE REST OF THE STORY SO FAR. JUST NO THE COPYING THE OTHER BOOKS.

Kind of copying twiligh and baseball with the basketball and thunder storms.

Amazing Keep It Up!

I loved this ending

Its not typical but still lovely/great (I cant think of a better word - thats how good it is!)

r u going to contunie it please

aww they had a baby

did she get turned?

aww great story

i love her faith in God.

thank you

its was a great mixture and i love the scriptures u included

powerful beginning

i love that verse

its one of the most comforting and powerfully verses in the bible

aw..this is so sweet! i cant wait for the next chapter..see how everything turns out! :)