Reviews for Ordinary love?
Jennyt82 chapter 25 . 4/5/2009
Very good story, i thoroughly enjoyed it and hope you update the last chapter soon.
Layla chapter 3 . 4/1/2009
Very interesting story
failwithpride chapter 25 . 3/31/2009
nice chapter!

is it gonna end soon?

update soon!
JZK chapter 25 . 3/31/2009
YEY!

Jaydon and Thane oculd have a baby thats half warewolf and half human cant they?

I mean or Jayden could be turned into half a warewolf if that makes sence?
MadameLeQueen chapter 24 . 3/14/2009
Omg, for an instant I actually believed that you put aliens in the story -_-;

Me: D: "are you serious?"

Thank god that wasn't true! Great update! I enjoyed it :D
earlkgm chapter 3 . 3/11/2009
like last chapter, spelling errors
earlkgm chapter 2 . 3/11/2009
some grammatical errors towards the end. (like writing her instead of here and not placing a comma at the last sentence)

still like it :)
earlkgm chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
dun dun dun...i like it so far.
JZK chapter 24 . 3/11/2009
Thaynes story was so sad

I cant believe Luke was his best friend!

at the start when you said the alien story - i was like wTf and I was thinking how cruel could you be fore killing them off like that - but it is quite a funny joke after the initial shock

I cant wait for the next chapter
FreedomofPress chapter 24 . 3/10/2009
That was such a good chapter, it was really nice to finally hear his back story. The beginning really threw me for a loop, and while it did take me a while to get back into the story, it was worth it for the laughs! One piece of advice, Spell Check is your friend. Reading "Aliens" as "alians" was kind of annoying, and there were other little mistakes like that throughout. Other than that, completely enjoyable. Can't wait to see Jaden's reaction!
FreedomofPress chapter 23 . 2/18/2009
I am super stoked for the next chapter! I think this is what we've all been waiting for! But it sad, as it signals the end of the story. This chapter was excellent, quite tragic actually. Please update soon!

P.S. it's subconscious and sabotaging
failwithpride chapter 23 . 2/17/2009
arrggh! your so evil! u cant just leave it like that for long...

u have to update!

soon!

i wanna know, i wanna know, i wanna know!

please update soon...

i like this chapter.
lady.of.the.lake524 chapter 23 . 2/17/2009
OMG! this story is AMAZING! you have to finish it. when i was reading it i couldnt stop it was so good! its really hard to find good stories that i really like and this is deffinately one of my favorites:) you had some spelling mistakes but in the ending chapters u fixed it. I have the same problem too i cant spell for beans spell check is my best friends:) i cant wait till your next chapter.
dblack50 chapter 22 . 2/2/2009
I can't believe you killed him either, but I do understand a story getting away from what you planned. Sometimes you have to do what fits with the flow of the story, and I agree that this did...however sad it might be.

I want to say, I like how you work your faith into the story in such a believable way too. Keep it up!
MadameLeQueen chapter 22 . 1/30/2009
I love this story :D

Update x]
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