No! How could you leave after such a cliff-hanger! Ag!You know how to torment your readers! Ah! I can only wait so many days without a good story before I start to die slowly. I blame you if I die! Great story and awesome plot.

OK WHAT! He called off the wedding! NO! I know he's being unfair and she should be able to choose her own husband, but I REALLY liked how it was before. And Kelley! Who the heck is Kelley. I was jealous right along side Jaden when I read that part. This is an frustrating chapter, but I also congratulate you on effectively entwining your readers(one being me)into the story. Great writing!

AMAZING story! I am Dying for more!

Its really intresting how he is so moody. I'm pretty sure you are using the same kind of werewolves that staphanie meyer is and you are really doing well with how they act with the mood swings and bad tempers and stuff. I like it. LIke before I would be careful with your grammar.

So, I like your plot despite it being all saddness right now. There was a few gramatical errors but your intresting plot and voice make up for it and I'm not one to nit-pick. Its really good and I want to stop typing and read more. BYE!

Good stuff!

No! you're waiting until January to update? I just read this whole thing tonight and I'm loving it and then suddenly, just when I think that we're coming to a close THIS happens? ah! Great job so far!

please dont let this be the last one before January!

this story is awesome! please update soon :)

I cant wait for more

New reader here! I loved your story, finished it all yesterday! So... Pleaz update soon!

I can't wait to read what happens!

UPDATE SOON! :D

I love this story! it kind of hit home though because it reminded me of how i dumped my boyfriend because he was using me and found out that three days later he had a date with a girl named Kelly...but it helped me connect to Jaden a lot more.

I love it. and a turn with himletting her go. i hope she stays though. i love about the bible though it is very aswome. u r a very go writter. keep up the good work.

GR...I don't like this chapter. I sorta do I guess since Jaden started to have feelings for Thayne but yeah...They better not end up with other people.

Please update soon! Thanks.

Hey! Wonderful job on the chapter! It really is amazing! Please update soon, I'm dying here!

Bella

wow