Reviews for Pieces
a day dream believer chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
i love your poems.

i always appreciate it when someone can articulate what I cannot.

the mask, the "should i receive punishment or praise," . . . . so true.

and whether or not anyone can make a difference. whether its worth trying, or if we're better off just putting up the front and making others smile.

so many things in the other poems really spoke to me too...

thank you for reminding me that sometimes other people really have the same thoughts.

Unknown Survivor chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
Very nicely done. The concept behind this piece is one that I don't see often. Keep up the good work. (:

~Unknown Survivor~