| Reviews for The Black & White Affair |
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   ilovetheopera chapter 2 . 9/10/2008 Brilliant stuff, fast-paced and interesting. Better than a lot of shit I've read in the past few months. Very good actually. Please do continue. |
| blurrylights chapter 2 . 9/8/2008 Interesting...I like this so far! Update soon! :) |
| abandoned1234 chapter 1 . 9/3/2008 WOW. I have to say, I am a REALLY BIG nitpicker for grammar and writing style, but I have to say this story so far is really impressive. :) I love your writing-flowy, but not too flowery, and everything that you mention has a point. I like that you are specific, but not tedious in your details. Excellent job! I just have a hard time that Sklyar would sit in the back for twenty minutes. And that she really looks seventeen. Will there be an explanation for the latter point? I sure hope so! I will definitely be watching this story. Can't wait to read more! |
| blurrylights chapter 1 . 9/3/2008 Nice...i like the integration of the other story into this one. It's a good idea...I also like the "forbidden fruit" topic. This story looks awesome so far, so update soon! :) |
| truelala chapter 1 . 9/3/2008 I am so happy right now. After I happily stalked and read all of your Little Less Obvious fic (clearly, I didn't review, but I blame it on you-I was supposed to be a productive member of society, tsk, and you ruined that), I happened upon this beaut. Every guys dream and fantasy just came true. They just banged the hot new teacher. Jack probably died and went to heaven. |
| ilovetheopera chapter 1 . 9/3/2008 Mm, I'm watching this. Sounds like a load of fun. |