|Reviews for Baby Face|
| PoorEnglishArtist chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
I really like the contrasts that you use, the small truths that appear, although maybe the "you're high, of course" would have done better in brackets?
Very nicely done. :)
| Justin Vengeance chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
I like it.
There is a typo on the because on line 7. This is just my style but I would avoid any periods until the very last one. I would put commas where they are. You don't have to though, I think it flows fine with out it.
I really like this poem. The last phrase of baby face really resonates with me.