Reviews for Slave
crosen chapter 19 . 7/15/2009
OMG, I knew Damon wasn't a bad guy! I'm so attached to him. Still there is no reason to treat a girl that way. I understand why he did it but he lost some major brownie points. This just gives him the chance to make it up, but obviously he's gotta be sneaky.. Please update soon!
DarkestOfNights chapter 18 . 7/15/2009
BAH this was an EVIL chapter, just pure evil. And of course now more drama will ensue over this. I should have known it was a bad idea to think it was alright to trust Tim, what a jerk, why would he do that...what a prick. Anyways hope you update soon so I can read all the drama to follow this chapter.
StormieDaze chapter 18 . 7/15/2009
Yay! more please?
crosen chapter 18 . 7/15/2009
Ah,I thought Tim was a good guy? Ughh, not what Olivia needs right now. I hope you get the next chapter out soon!
Lix Lorn chapter 18 . 7/15/2009

BAD Tim...

Dont worry about it chapter 7 . 7/14/2009
How can brothers be 2 months apart?

Also, spell check.

Their, there, etc
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 2 . 7/14/2009
"she noticed that it seemed even larger inside then outside"

then should be than.

:) A little grammar mistake, at least I think :)

Yeah, it is a little slow, but thats better than too fast, so dont sweat it :D
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Yeah! Ive read the first chapter! It was really good :D
Stargazer05 chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Wow! great story!
Lix Lorn chapter 17 . 7/13/2009

I love M fics. You get to explore the Dark Side...

DarkestOfNights chapter 17 . 7/13/2009
Well of course I'm happy that it was Damon and not Devin who took her virginity, because well I don't like Devin that much, he's a prick. You did a good job on this chapter, though I wish she didn't black out. I hope she wakes soon. I wonder how things will be like between them now.
Brendarosietta chapter 17 . 7/13/2009
Damn... good chapter! Won't Devin be mad if he finds out? Please update soon!
StormieDaze chapter 17 . 7/13/2009
it was good.

And you lied the other say you said you would either put a new chapter up that night or the next morning.
margaret chapter 16 . 7/13/2009
Lix Lorn chapter 16 . 7/12/2009
I really like the Tim angle... good idea!

~General Everin Stormclaw of the Many Titles, High Priest of the Crazy Hand, Master of the Emerald Stars and Acolyte of the New Chu Order, Dragon Prince and the Sixth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy and the Moonrider, Commander of the Blood Talons and the Last Hairlander, S/He Who Knows, out.
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