Reviews for Aesthetically Correct
PhoenixTorte chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
I like the feeling of diconnection in this poem. Most people wouldn't find themselves "aethetically correct" with scars. I think that you were able to give a sense that the writer or persona was a cutter or something with a sense of low self esteem. It was very good. (If you really cut yourself, though, don't do that! I don't want to see a promising writer get hurt!)