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![]() ![]() ![]() I have read this three or four times. Every time I -think- I review... but I apparently don't. Your poetry makes me brain dead. I love the eyebrows into chains line. Your flow-y writing is making me incredibly jealous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good, it got more and more intense as i kept reading down the lines, you clenched me in this piece and didn't let me go |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you've interspersed historical markers into the rush. They really enhance the overall concept, and bring the present work into a clearer focus. Well written. MD:77. |
![]() ![]() ![]() shit man you were right on with this i shouldn't read good, effective poetry when i feel like dying it gets me all teary-eyed and whatnot can't even pick out any favorite lines. all equally wonderful |