Reviews for i should be in advertising
kit feral chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
I have read this three or four times.

Every time I -think- I review... but I apparently don't.

Your poetry makes me brain dead.

I love the eyebrows into chains line.

Your flow-y writing is making me incredibly jealous.
heart'sespionage chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
very good, it got more and more intense as i kept reading down the lines, you clenched me in this piece and didn't let me go
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
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Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
I like how you've interspersed historical markers into the rush. They really enhance the overall concept, and bring the present work into a clearer focus. Well written. MD:77.
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
shit man

you were right on with this

i shouldn't read good, effective poetry when i feel like dying

it gets me all teary-eyed and whatnot

can't even pick out any favorite lines. all equally wonderful