You start a lot of the sentences and paragraphs with "Becca." I'm not sure whether you were going for parallel construction or it just happened. You have beautiful imagery and description; I found myself having perfect pictures of the scenes in my head.

Hm, I wonder what happened to Charlie? Maybe he's a wolf, to...

deer anthor,

you changed some plots of the fiction.

you took it seriously. i like your fiction.

you are amazing. it's more clear to me.

je t'aime.

kokopelli

really, really, really good.

please continue