Reviews for Becca's Becoming
Freaky Fred chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
You start a lot of the sentences and paragraphs with "Becca." I'm not sure whether you were going for parallel construction or it just happened. You have beautiful imagery and description; I found myself having perfect pictures of the scenes in my head.

Hm, I wonder what happened to Charlie? Maybe he's a wolf, to...
kokopelli chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
deer anthor,

you changed some plots of the fiction.

you took it seriously. i like your fiction.

you are amazing. it's more clear to me.

je t'aime.

wolfprint chapter 3 . 9/21/2008
really, really, really good.

please continue
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