Reviews for Sleep
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
Any one who has ever had insomnia/sleep deprivition knows what you mean! Sweet, short, and simple. Good job. Peace.
Halan Lore chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
It's got a nice meaning
I see London I see Sam's Town chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Ah, well haikus are generally difficult to write due to the restrictions. I believe I've only managed to write one, mildly good haiku xP For the most part, I've incorporated inside jokes into haikus to make them more fun. :] But they can be fun to write (as well as a challenge) when trying to write with vivid imagery... maybe something you might want to try for future haikus (if you want).

Happy writing! :)

J.V.