|Reviews for Birthday Gift|
| Wildblumen chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Nice story in spite of being somewhat short, keep it up;)
| nutbuster chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Oh my god. This is amazing. It echoes my pain about how I feel towards my awkward friend. (although I absolutely would NOT replicate the ending in any way, lol) I thought we were best friends, but she never tells me, and I've asked her. And how this other girl seems to get along with her 100x more.
(Actually, I've written scenarios about confronting her, but that's not the point here.)
At some parts in this story, such as the time skips, it seems choppy. As if various parts of the story are missing. (Not enough details to sustain.) Or things just seem to move too fast. But now that I've read through it again, I'm not too sure.
| rookbones chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
Beautiful. I didn't expect the last part, the unveiling of the gift, I mean. Write more often?
| Sunny W. Ether chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
...I love twisted horror stories.
Very, very, VERY well done.
| Crysta Mayville chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
HAHAHAHA! OMG, this rocked! Wonder how Sarah's gonna cope with this...
| Glenn Dusting chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
Really liked this story and what a great birthday gift, wish I had friends who put that much thought and effort into a gift. Then again, maybe not. Keep Writing.
| Lithium of Mercy chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
What a loving sort of friendship, in a horribly macabre and way. I like it!