hopefully you didnt intend for this to be romantic in any way, because i find that i too have been veering off towards the 'there is no hope in humanity' angsty side of things; rather than the 'i can't believe he left me for that blonde chick' angst.

this is a more mature take on emotional poetry; and i think it's alot better than the teen angst stuff fp is host to.

I found it very abstract, but the romantic undertones really stood out, and I loved your use of colour descriptions throughout.

I don't really understand, but I like your use of colors, especially indigo.