|Reviews for Maybe|
| vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
Ooh, I like this (:
Normally italics annoy the living frijoles out of me, but in this poem, they really work and I like it.
I like the way it rhymes, it really flows. The stanzas keep everything as a separate thought of a main idea. Very good. (:
"So maybe it’s just better I go
I may be better off alone
I’m so sorry I led you to this,
I wish that there was only empty bliss"
Is probably my favorite line.
Beautiful poem. I look forward to reading some of your other work. (:
By the way, thank you so much for your reviews on my pieces! It's really nice when someone takes the time to give a little feedback (:
| IndiaLikeTheCountry chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
Ah, this is really sad, but beautifully written :)