so when did sebastian become an asshole? or is it even him shes talking about. why write this chapter with no real conclusion if youre not going to continue. i know the 2nd chapter gave us an end, but still. there really is no point for this one then

OMG me thinkies this is amazing! You are so gunna be a famous writer when your older and i'll be like OMG i know her! hehe. Well done sweety, i absolutely loved it :) Love you xx

Ok i so realised there were more chapters lol..ok i didn't but omg its scary i can see it in my head, they are such a fantastic couple..well done Lo hehe i love the bit where it says they will shun us..so didn't remind me of you me and Emily hehe

Love you Loo x

ill keep it short and sweet; i like it :)

Hehe. You're tan. You look weird. Made-a-me giggle! That's what it did. Very cute couple they make. I good at grammar. Me go write rest chapter of Bam. Me like your two-shot ;p

Aw they're so cute! I like that name. Bonny. Although my way of spelling it is Bonnie. Cause I like it like that ;) Seb is really cute and a fun character. This was super fun to read so don't ever think you're not brilliant sweetheart :p CAUSE YOU ARE!

That was really cute. I'm glad you added the (short) second chapter.

Nice job!

-AG :)

CUTE!

One-shot? THIS is JUST a ONE-SHOT?

NO! Add another chapter! Please? Hehehe. :)

Keep writing! :D

xoxo,

chocolatecaramel

Argh Laura! How cool is this!

Yes i agree with laura here... where is the end?

Wow can i have your autograph now before you get famous? Please please. Oh and dont forget me when you get all famous hehe. Love you

x

Omg loo that's amazingly wicked, no wonder you want to be a writer hunni bunni btw when you are i will be buying every single book you do lmao...one thing though WHERES THE END IM DESPIRATE TO KNOW MORE! lol

Love you tonnes x

Aha.

Stellar.

Oh my.