Reviews for How the Cow Got Its Spots: Native American Legend
Nicki BluIs chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
this seems unfinished. like the rest was hacked off. You spent quite a bit of time with the intro so i thought you would have a better conclusion than "nothing worked."

I do like the idea of a folk tale. The use of a falling star is very creative and incorporates the celestial bodies well.

Nicki :P

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wolfprint chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
huh, that is very interesting. did you come up with that, or is really a native american fable?
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Fp messed up and repeated your title twice.

I like this, the idea behind it is really cute and sweet, well minus the cows in pain thing. Your descriptions were nice too. The line breaks seemed a little weird though and I definitely think some periods might be good in addition to the commas, but still nice job.

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