Reviews for Momentary Optimism
feluda chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
'overlapping lives' and 'rhythmic revolutions' jump out. well put; maybe edit the last bit? seems repetitive n unorginal...
Limy chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
Really, really nice and honest. A little cliched ending, but still nice. And, I like the specifics - written with someone in mind?