|Reviews for NightMoths|
| Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
imo similes are weak. striking ", like" from line 2 would add toughness, i think.
you're not really watching the world, are you, but are semi-consciously captivated by one miniscule motion in it.
| ode to melancholy chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
Love this. A lot. But you knew that already. :)
| i-want-2-delete-my-account chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Nice description of the moths.