Reviews for NightMoths
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
imo similes are weak. striking ", like" from line 2 would add toughness, i think.

you're not really watching the world, are you, but are semi-consciously captivated by one miniscule motion in it.

good, though.
ode to melancholy chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
Love this. A lot. But you knew that already. :)
i-want-2-delete-my-account chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Nice description of the moths.