|Reviews for crown of thorns|
| Meii chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
Kind of like edgar Allan poe meets La belle dame sans merci.
Or maybe I'm just being delusional again. Sorry, I'm tired.
Anyways I like this. It's very good, and it actually did inspire me. I makes me think of fairies, or wait... the brother's grimm. That one iron heinrich story where the guy has the chains binding his heart until his master turns back from a frog to a prince again? I don't know if you've read it but this reminded me of it. Come to think of it it also made me think of A christmas carol... jacob marley being chained for all eternity as a ghost, because of his selfishness, and greed during life?Yeah... I was reading through it yesterday because I had nothing else to read... Ok I;m going to stop making comparisons now. The bottom line is that I think it's really good poetic horror.
| tangledwebweweave chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Very nice imagery, angst, and rhyme.
I'm confused to which the topic is, but I know it's a deep reason of fault. Maybe a failed relationship?
I'm sorry for your pain.
Nicely done. :D