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dizzy
Isca
chapter 1 .
9/9/2008
I loved the second stanza. It was so unique and moving. The third stanza felt a bit awkward, but overall I liked it. It was emotionally powerful! :)
diffident
chapter 1 .
9/8/2008
Excellent use punctuation to serve a purpose.
marie