Reviews for rift
cassi crysta chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
I really like the first you used unfair like that, and how you didn't use don't in the last line, do not really fits in with how you worded that first part. ces't magnifique!
writing-to-fill-the-emptiness chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
"so i close my mouth
and i breathe these words.

you knew me then.
and you do not know me now."

gah. i think that's my favorite part of this poem. it really sums up the theme nicely. keep writing! :)

much love

doe heart chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
this tragic beauty prevails.

there is a lot of truth in this. and that makes me sad.
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
I really like your writing. It's honest and fresh.

I especially loved the 2nd to last stanza, "so i close my mouth and i breathe these words." Wonderful.
we are immortal chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
you knew me then.

and you do not know me now.

great line.

great poem in general, really.

Alicia Marianne chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
wow...creepy how much i relate to this. especially the last paragraph... cuz its whats kinda happening between me and my ex, but he has a girlfriend and she doesnt know im seeing him... he used to know me indeed, but he doesnt know me now
AimeeRaven chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
hey :) i like this, it’s totally unusual for you I think and not one of your best, but I love the ending…I haven’t been on ficpress for months! you keep changing pennames it's so hard to keep track :(
Murder245 chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Incredible, as your work always is.
CatBear chapter 1 . 9/8/2008
Wow, that was very powerful. I loved it.