|Reviews for Parade of Ash|
| radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
I haven't been here for a long time... thought that I would stop by and as always your poem is written beautifully...
| SEMMU chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
Great job with describing the endothermic nature of humans. I particularly enjoyed the imagery envoked by: " Even the small steps I must make this day
Seem to me to be those of a child in his father's shoes".
I can see myself standing in the hallway, during the dead of winter, just praying that I can make it to the coffee pot.
Great job! Write on!
| I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
Absolutely beautiful, Matthew. One of your best pieces to date. I love the images you chose of fall and winter. Wonderful, wonderful work. :)