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english summer rain chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
for some reason this reminds me of why people don't understand why i want to go to museums. why wouldn't you want to go to museums?

you think up some genius closers man.
Morgan Duriya chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Very true. As all writers know well done
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
konban wa

That's so cute. My favorite is the last stanza: "my friend says she doesn't get poets / (and the next day when she says she understands / me / i hide the smile and continue the conversation.)" May I add that to my quote book - with reference made to you, of course. I just love that line.

Ha det

Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 9/9/2008

i've been noticing lately one of the major themes in my worldview is how my perceived reality is a few millimeters displaced from that of everyone else, and i think i keep trying to capture that in my writing...

Anyway, quite nice.