This is nice! I like it very much. Hades with silver eyes is totally sexy :D

Hope there's more to come soon :)

Tasty. I love your descriptions.

Keep up the writing, ducky ;D

ok, liking, but one small problem. Your using Greek mythology, but Cupid is Roman. You want Eros (Cupid's Greek counterpart)

I love this chappie.

Mostly because Hades sounds so... dreamy (i'm weird i know. lmao)

I loved the whole tunnel scene and the description of his palace it was AWESOME. lol

can't wait till the next chappie, post soon!

Goodness. I'm already captivated. I hope the next chapter comes out soon.

I love this story. Greek mythology is one of my favorite subjects, and your re-telling of this myth is amazing. I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work!

i love how you describe the river Styx. and the whole struggle with her biting him. if it were me i'd just let him kiss me, but that's 'cause Hades is freakin awesome! and amazingly gorgeous! ahh, revel in the hotness of the Lord of the Dead. ah...happy fangirl moment...

wow!

i love this storyline! this has to be one of my favourite Persephone/Hades stories!

and yeah i agree with the whole not liking the aphrodite being out to get persephone because they are such good friends in this story.

keep up the good work! can't wait for the next add

yeah, Aphrodite should like Persephone. Actually, everyone should like Persephone. Because she's a very likeable person. Yay her! so, dundundun! Hades has finally kidnapped Persephone, drugging her with the deadly Narcissus flower! do they make that into a drug that people smoke, 'cause people seem to smoke, sniff, shoot, and any other way you take drugs with anything. they're all idiots. o, how are you going to do Charon? UPDATE SOON!

oh, that's hilarious! loved it! i loved how Aphrodite was like "what do you know about intimacy?" that was funny! that just made my day, and i needed that, 'cause i'm sick. so thank you!

that's an interesting take on the Hades Persephone. I am intrigued. I must read more, update soon!

hey, I like this story line and this is the second Hades come Persephone story I am quite hooked onto on fictionpress.

just to let you know there is a teeny problem with the hairstyles you were trying to describe. Demeter and Persephone's hair was tyed into buns right? You described it as buns in their hair. then Hades hair was tyed at the "nape of his nape". Just a few pointers to avoid confusion with other readers!

Thanks and please update!