Okay this story was just torture. I'm won't say it's unrealistic because almost all the cliches on here are more fitting for the word. In fact I might even say it's too realistic? And I HATE stories like these. Your protagonist is spineless. Ryan is a tool. And if my best friend ever broke girl code like that and told some guy I'd been pining over him forever when she clearly believes nothing will come of it. FGS like did you invite the man over ON YOUR WEDDING in PUBLIC so he could personally reject your best friend? Your writing skills are very polished. Good grammar, no major issues with tense and what not but your plotline sucks. Please put a sadist/masochist warning in your summary to ward off more flames

Very unrealistic. Noelle acts like a rag, willing to be used whenever and discarded when he feels too much of a coward. Ryan sounded so much like a tool, a huge ass actually. Like what? you expect her to wait while he proves his theory of finding someone better and when he finally gets the balls to act like a selfish jerk and take what he wants anyway he gets her? If he really wanted her to stop and move on then he shouldnt have come. He came cause he was a selfish prick. I mean who would show up just to tell you to move on from him cause he is not deserving? Lol! What a joke. Only a self absorbed ass would do that. Its just pathetic that the girl was too spineless to say no and admit she deserved more. She is probably the martyr type to enter relationships that are emotionally draining cause she doesnt love herself and has such a low self esteem asnd absolutely no self worth that she thinks that type of treatment is all she deserves. what with his bullshit excuses. These kinds of stories disgust me, its the reason why most women let themselves be abused emotionally and physically. Its the type of stories that make women fantasize and wish for something unrealistic. They end up miserable in their lives anyway after marrying or having relationships with such pricks.

Noelle was ssoo pathetic! It was too cliche and unrealistic.

I really love this ]

It was a cute story!

My first boyfriend promised me that he would marry me one day, and this story kind of gives me hope for it...

-sigh-

It is a cute story, but how can he go from saying that he isn't sure about his feelings for her to that he loves her. I do get that he loves her a lot, but I would feel so confused about what he said. Or well maybe not at the very moment, but thinking about it afterward.

But over all, it was cute. And it was sweet for her best friend to invite the guy she has been crushing over to her wedding. That is a true best friend there.

Love the story!

~*~Ngoc1231~*~

Somewhat unrealistic, but very cute! It was an enjoyable read and made me feel all happy inside :)

omg that was awesome, especially the ending, I was getting all emotional!

aw. that's just precious. i love it, love it, love it.

it's adorable.

This was lovely. :) Very well written, too. Great job.

very cliched, but cute nonetheless...keep up the great work! :)

aw this was so cute! )

Hm... I liked it, but I felt like there could've been more...

There was just something missing, although I'm not sure what.

Kind of creepy though, I knew a Noelle and a Ryan back in high school, and they were a lot like this.

Cute :)

-Aria

i really liked how the story was set out,

the only thing was the ending which was a little abrupt ? not really sure how to put it \

but i thought overall it was really cute !

great job :)